This is the reason you are one of my favorite NG artists. You know how to put music together, and in a successful, effective way. You definately have skill in what you do. keep it up!
As far as this song goes, even tho its just a demo, it still has the fullness and power that a full song should have. I can't wait to hear the full version. Your music is awsome. Good job!
Feel free to check mine out on this account or on DJ_Zeeber
Oops wrong account
Well i accidently submitted it under my Album account. So....its gonna suck compared to my others. See the rest of my songs under my zeeber85 account.
Hope this song doesn't disapoint anyone. THIS IS NOT MY BEST WORK! its not even final yet lol. Oh well...stuff happens!
Pretty good for as short as it is. And it has POWER to it. :P I like it! Very Trance. Good job
why wasn't i invited?
First off this sounds very....deep house stylish...not a bad thing. The bass had me thinking there WAS a party next door :P
The synth choices were fine for this peice, however there did seem to be parts that repeated a lot. Given, its trance so its bound to do that, but i seemed to think something else was going to happen...
and then it did about halfway when you changed it up a little with a new melody. not THAT i liked. Very cool transistion and overall execution of it. You have some talent, i thinkn you'll go go far with it.
Overall, i liked this song. You have more skill than i do, and yet your younger...good job. Keep it up!
Hey first off, i'll try to give this review in chronological order as i hear it.
The begining is very cool! Its also different from your style, but it also is very good! This seems very upbeat.
The main theme came in, and you did a nice lead in. The melody is very well done, and this song is not lacking any form of fullness. Nice synth choice as they are flowing nicely together
This song is catchy!! Good job. I think you did what your looking for.
The structure seems to be all here. 2 choruses perhaps? oh wait its ending now :( lol
Nice fadeout at the end, didn't get bored at all during this song. good job!
Feel free to check out my music and review! I'm not as good as you lol but working on it!
Hey zeeber85! First of all thanks for your organized review lol. Im glad you like this style, im gonna try keeping with it from now on. Ill be sure to check out your stuff as soon as i can :)
Thx for your review!
Better than the first
I thought the original was good, but this tops it off. Very well done. Once i figure out how to use the vocoder in FL i'll start using it. lol but congrats on another masterpiece
Hah, now we're going to need a 'daft-punk-esque' genre...
You have once again produced an amazing peice. You are upcomming to become on of the best on NG (if you aren't already) This and Outside are now 2 of my favorite songs, and you have become one of my favorite artists. You know how to make music, and also vocals. Good job!
I look forward to more from you!
Feel Free to check out and review some of my music and leave some reviews!
I'm going to be sticking to this style for a while. I've got lots of new ides for songs coming in, and everyone seems to love them :D
You submitted it on the wrong account. Trying to take all the credit again?! lol just playin'
By the way for those that don't know, i was the other part on this ;P
Check out our collab account Eternal_group
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WEll a little late on the review, but thought i'd leave one anyway. This song is very cool. As usuall your base lines rule! Your melodies flow and the song overall is great!
As someone before me said, it is much more trance than techno. But who cares, the song OWNS!
Good job, i look forward to more of your songs. And i don't think i have your AIM/MSN. Mine is GreenSweatShirt5 (AIM) or Zeeber85 (MSN) Feel free to contact me!
Hi zeeber! i dont know if i have you on my MSN either... i have alot of people on my MSN who wanna now how i work.. but that is just a one time conversation.
welllllll where to start. It had really no sense of direction, and no flow. It seems you just plugged in a bunch of random notes and called it a day. This "song" lacks "fullness" and a beat that can lead it along.
The beat itself is basic and becomes diverse at random times, and it almost makes no sense.
The "melody" is where i really got confused. It didn't have any musical structure whatsoever to it (at least that i could tell) and it really seemed like it was just random notes. Put in some strings, make the song flow, and try again.
Overall i'd have to say this wont make the cut. It's not even trance. If anything i'd put it under techno. I hope i wasn't too critical in this review, but im only trying to help you improve and create better songs. Don't take this all the wrong way. We all have to start somewhere. Just keep on trying, and through reviews and more experience, you will improve.
Hope this helped, and feel free to check out my music. Keep trying! Oh and what program are you using? Fl studio? Reason? Other?
hey!, well where to start, thanks for being honest and telling me the worst parts about my song, its good to know what i needa work on, (you shoulda heard the first version :P) and yes i am using FL studio 5, its much easier then anything i have ever used, also you caught me, i was having a hard time with ideas so i just...clicked buttons ^_^, hopefully ill find more structure, THANK YOU :D
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