fast paced
This song is nice and fast paced! however, some of the melodies seem to be off pitch with the rest of the song. I know there were parts (abotu halfway) where you intended a pitch change, but the fast melody seemed to be out of pitch with the rest of that phrase. But i could be wrong.
Overall good work! Keep it up and keep on trying!
Feel free to check out my music and review!
DJ Zeeber
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1225232&sub=330
55
10 for you!
Wow this is an amazing piece! I liked it a lot! it had diversity, its own feel to it, no WONDER its a 2x platnum track! The effects were AWSOME, and it kept me listening the whole time. I even played it a few times and added to your download total ;P
You are a very good audio writer so keep it up! Feel free to check out my music!
DJ Zeeber
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1225232
your crazy!
well...its VERY FAST...i'm talking like TOO fast. LoL Its not bad, but i couldnt' really get into it. It was a nice try!
I DID like some of the effects you used though. It was crazy fast though. I gave you a low score on originality and effort though considering its MY song lol, but i did give you permission to remix it so i have to give it a decent score. I still like mine better ;P
see ya later and look forward to finishing our collab =P
DJ Zeeber
nice and simple
Although it's not trance (which might give you a low score in teh category) its got an ambient feel to it. I liked the way it was set up, and i liked the melody. This song had a feel of sadness, and yet hope, to it. Who knows, maybe I'm just being EMO right now LOL. Anyways, good work, but to make it trance it needs a lot of work. Keep it up!
Feel free to check out my music and review! (link at bottom)
DJ Zeeber
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1225232
WOW!
i must say this is the first of your songs to scare the $#*t out of me LOL. WAY too loud and distorted. but once i got out from under my table once i realized its safe, the song blew me away! (quite literally but anyway ;P) this song sounds like it will be AWSOME when you finish it. holy crap...NICE!
gota finish it! i lowered overall cuz of distortion and too loud, but the finished one will DEFINATELY get a 10 if its as awsome as i think it will be.
Also, i was wondering if you could send me one of your songs (ocean melody, the .flp file) and let me tinkner with it and let me figure out how you did some of those effects. I wont submit it anywhere or anything, i just want to see some of your effects. Also with your permission, i'd like to use it as a theme song for a friends video :P
anyways, fix this one up and i cant wait for the end result!
BTW my AIM is greensweatshirt and my email is zeeber85@gmail.com if you needed. hope to hear from you! (if i can't have the FLP file thats cool, just though i would ask)
DJ Zeeber
hmm.. yeah. i dont know what i was thinking when i made this one... it sounds really horrible.
i gotta lower the volume on the kick and do some other things..
i was trying to make something diverse with the guitar instrument:P
anyway. if its not gonna be submitted on newgrounds then i would like to have a copy sent by MSN or something.
i think i have you added on my MSN. havent been online latly but i will log into MSN soon enough.
use my song. i dont mind... as long as i get credits:P
Thx for your review:D
//Psybtronicle Waste\\
Pretty cool!
The begining caught my attention right away. It was very well planned out, and gave me an idea of drving down the highway in a rain storm (haha not sure where the rain came from but anyways) i liked how you changed up the beats, however, the main theme didn't really change too much causing a lack in diversity. But overall the song was pretty cool. I might even consider it borderline DnB. Anyways keep up the good work and feel free to check out my music!
DJ Zeeber
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1225232&sub=321
00
Wow, thanks. I see you have some interesting tracks yourself. Actually, im just a novice author for now. I am trying to get better. I will listen to your tracks and enjoy them. Thanks for your kind words and stuff. If you find any loops and sample I could use please send some to me, I will see if I can mix them. The ones I currently have arent much and it will be some time before I run out of ideas for them. And dont worry, I will not rip off anyone elses work. And sorry for the lack in diversity.
nice and simple
This song was very nice and simple sounding. Although not complex, its simplicity helped compliment its strong points. This song was easy to listen to, very soothing, and very nicely done! I pretty much agree with Crud for the rest!
Keep it up and keep trying!
DJ Zeeber
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1225232
Thank yo for reviewing my songs. I think the most annoying thing about making music is not getting to hear what people even think about it. most of my songs are pretty simple but thats how i like em.
-SM-
i liked it
this song had a decent tempo and it had a unique feel to it. You had a good choice of instruments (some i even recognized lol) and they all fit well together. Although the song was lacking in diversity, it made up for it with original note choice and the song flowed very nicely. It did have a repetative nature to it, however, i liked this song, and look forward to hearing more of your music in the future!
With a few more melodies (possibly solos) and a changing beat, this song could be rocking! Good work and keep trying! Hope this helped! feel free to check out my music and review it! My AIM is Greensweatshirt5 if you ever want some tips or help!
DJ Zeeber
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1225232
Thanks for reviewing. Man like 5 minutes before i put this on it shot down to a 2.50. i hate the people who vote down on peoples stuff to try and make theirs sound better. yea sure ill talk to you on aim sometime.
-SM-
Not great.
It wasn't bad, but it wasn't great either. It seemed you used preset sequences for most the song, which just repeated over and over. The song itself seems to lack in diversity, perhaps a few other instruments would have helped and more melodies.
Overall, the song didn't really have any diversity; it just repeated what seemed the main sequence over and over. After a while i was getting bored. Change it up, add some different beats and melodies and use some originality and you could make this much better!
Perhaps this is a harsh review, but im only trying to help you improve. We all have songs that don't quite make it, so keep trying and improving!
DJ Zeeber
Thanks for the tip man. i just was playing around with the program and came out with that. i wouldent know if its good or not cos i am not into that hole style of music. but i do love making any type of music. thanks for the tips. and no your review wasent harsh. you dident bad mouth me, you helped me, and for that i thank you eh...Dj Zeeber? :-S yah anyway thanks! :-)
not much melody
First off it had a great begining. I got into it, but then it faded to the melody. The melody was alright, but nothing speacial, and it seemed out of sinc with the rest of the song. Once it met with the begingin it really seemed misplaced and out of sinc. The beat was pretty basic, but it fit the song. There wasn't much diversity in the song either, it seemed like 3 maybe 4 patterns and it repeated them over and over.
It was a good attempt, and if you built apon what you have here, you could make this a hopping beat! Nice try, keep it up!
Sorry to be so critical, only trying to help you improve. Hope this helped!
DJ Zeeber
well this is my first song ever that i made on the full version i used to use the demo but im gonna practice more
Im a pilot and currently a college student. I'm majoring in Aviation Science and hope to work for the major airlines in a few years. I make music in my spare time. Go check it out!
Age 39, Male
Student
BSC
Joined on 5/24/05
total tirant 
B0UNC3 - Paradise on E 