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Another awsome song!

You've done it again! And its even only demo! (or so you say haha) It's awsome and nicely put together. I don't know how you do some of your synths and melodies but you never cease to amaze me. Maybe its cuz your from Sweden and they can make music over there LOL! Anyway good job on another great song and you HAVE to finish this one!

Good luck and keep on going!
DJ Zeeber

Perfect score for you!

Simply amazing! You are my favorite artist on NG and you were my inspiration to make music. I know have a bunch of songs! So i guess I want to say THANK YOU!

Now back to your song. It flows endlessly, i couldn't find anything wrong with it. Some of the effects you used were perfect. If only i knew how to do that. Please check out some of my music and feel free to comment. Maybe someday we can do a collab or something...it would be an honor to work with you! My AIM screen name is GreenSweatShirt5 so if you ever want to chat im around.

anyways great job on another awsome song. keep it up!

DJ Zeeber
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Good start but..

First off, its off to a good start. I liked the begining melody and lead in, but after that it seemed the song never changed. I think if you added some more beats and melodies, you could improve this song. Im not going to try to bash you or anything, i liked the song since it was peaceful, but it just didn't have the diversity that many people are looking for. Keep trying! I know you can do it!

DJ Zeeber

too loud

Too loud in my opinion. But not INSANELY loud, but enough to make my speakers cry lol. Perhaps turn it down a bit and it will be ok in that respect.

As for the song, its pretty diverse, and even a little strange at times haha but im just giving you some crazy advice. Maybe im just in a critical mood, so i think i've gone to the dark side today. but im generlly light side! i swear!! anywyas keep them comming i think you have some talent!

you kow where to find me,
DJ Zeeber

didn't make it on this one

Well, its TOO LOUD AND DISTORTED. Sorry ROFLCOPTER but this one just had too much distortion to hear it properly. The monitor window must have been RED the whole time. LOL. anyways i don't think its as good as some of your other ones, but you have more than enough to make up for one bad apple ;P

Keep them comming and i look forward to more of your songs!

Now THIS i like!

The begining is awsome! The bassline isnt too bad, although it probably coulda used a chorus or something like that, but it flowed with the song (if maybe just a little accented). And then there was a melody. It was very cool sounding, although some of the effects didn't quite fit, the didn't destroy the song either. This song i think was well done.

Once the guitar comes in, the song just takes off with solos!! and THAT is COOL! They REALLY add to the song! If you perhaps would have added them throughout the song instead of just one part, it might have kept the flow a little better, but the solos were very well done! If only there were more!

Good job and keep up the good work! Check out my music as well and review!

DJ Zeeber (NG name is Zeeber85)

synteza responds:

I like that bassline for one main reason: it's a home made square bass. It just sounds so much cooler knowing I made it. Besides that, it's very deep and resonates.

The effects are the theme, the Ion Storm, but they definitely don't dominate the song, the solos do. They're rather hard to make, so I suppose the only reason there are so little is because of how tedious their creation is.

Thanks for a well-written review!

-Extracy-

P.S.: I think I over-reverbed the sax!

Nice work!

The begining is pretty good, fast paced, yet, it has enough diversity to keep you interested. Perhaps a few sound tweaks (such as volume on some instruments) might help in some areas, but overall its nicely done.

I song for the most part had good structure, but in some areas i got lost in where the song was going. However, good effort and keep trying! I liked the song!

Feel free to check out my music and review! (search for Zeeber85)

DJ Zeeber

Revuen responds:

Thank you for the review. Yes i see now that some of the instraments are a bit too loud or soft at times, and hopefully i wont make the same mistake again.
Thank you again for the wonderful review,
-Revuen

Time to finish it!

i liked the intro; It had a nice buildup and diverse sound to it. The song also had an evil feel to it and pulled me into the song. However, beacause it isn't finished it ended before it got "good" so i rated low on effort since it isn't finished.

As for imporiving the song, i think if you build upon what you have and make some creative melodies and added "dark" effects, you could make this very cool. You are on a good start, so go ahead and finish it. Try not to use deafult pads and effects, but keep it diverse and original sounding. You're off to a good start!

Check out my music (search for zeeber85) and feel free to rate and review! I hope this was a helpful review and look forward to hearing the completed version!

DJ Zeeber

ZioUnleashed responds:

thanks for the review glad you like the choruses and it will be easy enough adding a evil effect to the rest of the song

awsome song!

Awsome song! I really liked it, even though its sounds like you're in the Middle East LOL!! some parts were a little distorted but overall its really good! I listened to it a few times!

Good job man and keep up the good work!

AND UPDATE OUR SITE!! LOL

DJ Zeeber

5 for you!

Very nice. You do have some talent with the effects (im still learning) and also musical talent as well. Looks like i have some competition with ROFLCOPTER. I look forward to possibly working with you in the future with our "alliance" so to speak.

Im a pilot and currently a college student. I'm majoring in Aviation Science and hope to work for the major airlines in a few years. I make music in my spare time. Go check it out!

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