zeeber85's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[«STAR LIGHT» .:EN3RGIE:.]

very upbeat

Hey first off, i'll try to give this review in chronological order as i hear it.

The begining is very cool! Its also different from your style, but it also is very good! This seems very upbeat.
The main theme came in, and you did a nice lead in. The melody is very well done, and this song is not lacking any form of fullness. Nice synth choice as they are flowing nicely together
This song is catchy!! Good job. I think you did what your looking for.
The structure seems to be all here. 2 choruses perhaps? oh wait its ending now :( lol

Nice fadeout at the end, didn't get bored at all during this song. good job!

Feel free to check out my music and review! I'm not as good as you lol but working on it!

DJ Zeeber

EN3RGIE responds:

Hey zeeber85! First of all thanks for your organized review lol. Im glad you like this style, im gonna try keeping with it from now on. Ill be sure to check out your stuff as soon as i can :)

Thx for your review!

bye!

[Khuskan: Exaggerate Extended]

Better than the first

I thought the original was good, but this tops it off. Very well done. Once i figure out how to use the vocoder in FL i'll start using it. lol but congrats on another masterpiece

DJ Zeeber

Khuskan responds:

Hah, now we're going to need a 'daft-punk-esque' genre...

[Khuskan - Exaggerate]

Very nice

You have once again produced an amazing peice. You are upcomming to become on of the best on NG (if you aren't already) This and Outside are now 2 of my favorite songs, and you have become one of my favorite artists. You know how to make music, and also vocals. Good job!

I look forward to more from you!

Feel Free to check out and review some of my music and leave some reviews!

DJ Zeeber

Khuskan responds:

I'm going to be sticking to this style for a while. I've got lots of new ides for songs coming in, and everyone seems to love them :D

[Psybot - Lightspeed]

awsome

WEll a little late on the review, but thought i'd leave one anyway. This song is very cool. As usuall your base lines rule! Your melodies flow and the song overall is great!

As someone before me said, it is much more trance than techno. But who cares, the song OWNS!

Good job, i look forward to more of your songs. And i don't think i have your AIM/MSN. Mine is GreenSweatShirt5 (AIM) or Zeeber85 (MSN) Feel free to contact me!

DJ Zeeber

Psybot responds:

Hi zeeber! i dont know if i have you on my MSN either... i have alot of people on my MSN who wanna now how i work.. but that is just a one time conversation.

Thx for your review!

//Psybotronicle Waste\\

[<sharpeye>inner thoughts]

what the...

welllllll where to start. It had really no sense of direction, and no flow. It seems you just plugged in a bunch of random notes and called it a day. This "song" lacks "fullness" and a beat that can lead it along.

The beat itself is basic and becomes diverse at random times, and it almost makes no sense.

The "melody" is where i really got confused. It didn't have any musical structure whatsoever to it (at least that i could tell) and it really seemed like it was just random notes. Put in some strings, make the song flow, and try again.

Overall i'd have to say this wont make the cut. It's not even trance. If anything i'd put it under techno. I hope i wasn't too critical in this review, but im only trying to help you improve and create better songs. Don't take this all the wrong way. We all have to start somewhere. Just keep on trying, and through reviews and more experience, you will improve.

Hope this helped, and feel free to check out my music. Keep trying! Oh and what program are you using? Fl studio? Reason? Other?

DJ Zeeber

isharpeyei responds:

hey!, well where to start, thanks for being honest and telling me the worst parts about my song, its good to know what i needa work on, (you shoulda heard the first version :P) and yes i am using FL studio 5, its much easier then anything i have ever used, also you caught me, i was having a hard time with ideas so i just...clicked buttons ^_^, hopefully ill find more structure, THANK YOU :D

[Petwoip - Harp Rock]

Almost ambient

I'd almost consider this ambient due to the slow beat. Also the way its set up with the bass its almost ambient. However, i did like the chorus notes and the build to the main part of the song.

The song lacked a little diversity and "fullness" but all in all i liked it!

Keep up the work!

DJ Zeeber

Petwoip responds:

Ambient? Never thought of that.

I feel the same you do. It does not sound "complete". I might have been able to do that if only my stupid program didn't delete the song. (I can't wait till Reason 3.0 comes).

I'm glad you enjoyed my song!

[Falling Through the Clouds...]

WE'VE GONE GOLD!!

WE GOT A GOLD TRACK OMG OMG OMG WoOT!! The Eternal IS COMMING TO TOWN!!

ehhhROFLCOPTER responds:

<3

[Psybot - Future Technoligy]

Good stuff

As always, you have proved yet again you are on top. This is a cool loop and it flows very well. (unlike my first attempt at a loop lol) Keep up the good work! Too bad you never improved Cyborg. It inspired me to make mine even tho it had its problems. Anyway good job and keep it up!

DJ Zeeber

Psybot responds:

thx =D

Cyborg is a song that is gonna be changed alot due to the guitar that makes the kick sound like a cat thats about to get killed with a chainsaw =P

But i hope i can finish it soon enough.

Thx for your review.

//Psybotronicle Waste\\

[_-_Heaven_-_]

awsome

i love this song and the way you redid it was pretty awsome. It was a nice job! The effects were very cool, and the instument choice gave it your own personal style. Although the song isn't originally your own, i think the personal touch you gave it made this a very good remix! Good job!

Feel free to check out my music and review!

DJ Zeeber
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1225232&sub=337
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Lova-Gurl responds:

thanks

[Graaandma! (Orch. Loop) LoZ:WW]

Very nice

Very nice work. It sounds a lot like the original, and is very soothing. Im sure someone will come around and scream and yell that you stole it from somewhere, but im not here to judge. Nice work!

Feel free to check out my muisc! Primarily trance

DJ Zeeber

SuperTonic64 responds:

:)

Thanks, but there is no MIDI avalible on the net for this particular song, till today. I spent 2 hours listening to the gameplay music in Wind Waker to make this song. I took it note by note in Finale, then afterwards, I saved it as a MIDI and submitted it to vgmusic.com. Once the site is updated, you will be able to see under the "gamecube" section where I submitted it. (The sequencer name is "Tiara" :))